Kenpachi Masamune

A relationship should at least be introduced or give us enough background to understand why the break up is occurring at the least. Doing either of those will let us ...

The introduction is terrible. Even Sailor Moon had a better introduction at the start of each episode. Though even that introduction was barely passable by current standards for 'My name ...

'done shoot' = don't shoot This was rather interesting with the flipping and sudden changes. Its an original style, but there is not much in terms of character development or ...

It is close enough to April. I think I could try one this month, as sort of a practice to November. Maybe make a thread and host our own Nano ...

This poem did bring up memories, but the most disturbing aspects are how you captured this feeling of loss and disgust that comes with writing on yourself, piercings and the ...

Powerful and bold it works well with your spacing choices. Locker door creakingly opens revealing Creakingly is not a word. 'creaks open' maybe? Photograph of old, discarded and peeling face ...

Here I thought this would be a tribute to Poe's Raven, but I guess I was wrong. Little black raven, while cute, you make the bird seem actually rather nice. ...

Very good it flowed and was beautiful. One of the few poems I've seen so far to actually have a good word choice and flow with depth and not whine ...

Eek. This seemed to be a little rushed. While it was good in many parts like the early description of the Gate it would go way too fast after 'slipping ...

Ooh-ohh! Someone taking a serious hammer to my work! Not to be critical of your review, but the point of this was a tell rather then show story. Much like ...

This was good, and I liked the imagery and especially the ending. It was sweet and flowed pretty well. Sappy only happens when it is done in bad taste, this ...

Very good. I liked how it was so emotionally deep and something so insignificant, but at the same time so beautiful because it is simple. A powerful poem and I ...

Quirky and mocking rhyme, but light and easy to read. I liked it, but there is not too much I can say about this. It was good.

Sorry, but I must agree with the others on this one as well. It was a poetic rant and Overeasy said it first. At the very least could it not ...

Perverted, but rather disgusting in some parts. It is unflattering and really raunchy to describe a woman in such ways. "You’ll take a throbbing member And vomit later in sex ...